December 7, 2012
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December 5 poem
Got a little behind on the project but catching up tonight, it certainly gives me an excuse to write. The important thing is to get back to the goal and my friend Suzanne gave me the pep talk I need. The inspiration, thinking about the color red and it went all stream of consciousness. So….here it is, and its a bit saucy.
It wasn’t at all like the movies,
fists tight like round red balls
on either side of the thrashing head
and the red shirt was not removed as
the wrists were held down
so the button fly was released
with the use of arching limber hips,
the toes gripped and popped
and hooked themselves on the waistband,
freed the cotton Hanes
emancipated the erection,
shimmied the jeans
down the back of the thigh and calf
until they collected crumpled
around the ankles and tennis shoes
with a “Whoop!” of surprise
and the gossamer silk gathered
at the navel, one hand still holding
the willing wrists, the other
pushing aside tights and
a sheer slip of satin,
plaid and pink silk
slick and sticky with sweat
clinging to their chests
and they made love on the floor
with their shirts on.
Comments (3)
Well done!
@crankycaregiver - Thank you so much! I don’t usually write stream of consciousness and I am pleased with how it turned out.
wonderful ! all “in the moment” intensity. I love that way of writing, it gives one such a feel for the reality and fantasy of the moment….. that magic that can be ” life” .