April 10, 2009
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A Silly Poem
Background: I came across this today and was going to toss it out. It wasn’t completed, and rather silly, but my husband liked its sort of “slice of life” quality and encouraged me to finish it. I rather like the way it turned out, although it is still…well… silly.
Revenge
There it sat on the ledge of the deck
a can of soda
cool and refreshing
waiting to be picked up
and drained of its nectaras I reached for its
bubbly effervescence
a bee landed
on the aluminum surface
dipping its body
in the sweet brown liquidI cursed at my misfortune
and waited for it to scurry
as I stewed in my thirst
and it flew, finally satiated
the little body heavy
with sugary carbonationthere was a hum and a slice
of air molecules being parted
and a gratifying THWACK
of plastic meeting wood
The thief was dead
and my revenge satisfied
Comments (2)
lol
Been there
Done that
Well said
Oh the poor bumbler
Thwacked for quenching a thirst
And he bee no more.