December 18, 2007

  • New Poem and exciting news

    Well, I did it, I am done with school and I now have a Bachelor of Arts in Professional Writing!  I finished last week, and I’ll graduate cum laude with a 3.698 GPA.  Not bad for being 35 and working full time while I did it, eh?

    Ok, enough crowing.  Since I’m done, I can go back to writing for pleasure instead of writing for grades.  Here is my first poem in a few months.

    Thanksgiving Dinner

    The flowers spilled over the edge of their vase
    bathing the table in perfumed decadence
    until the smells of turkey and dressing
    overshadowed the understated floral notes.

    Buttered vegetables and basted meat
    were passed, scooped, and piled
    on anxious Styrofoam quivering
    beneath the weight of uncomfortable burden.

    The years had not been kind to all who gathered
    to dine and forget together salty words
    and to hide the things unsavory
    with ladles and ladles of gravy.

    There were dinners past that no one mentioned
    scented feasts on sweet dahlias of innocence
    those who ate from the harvest of shame
    with fingers that dipped into and tore tender flesh.

    It is better to grow drunk on shared silence,
    to stare at plates that have no memories
    to focus on food that cannot speak
    or come back from the dead.

Comments (6)

  • Congrats on finishing school. What a nice poem I like it very much. Have a wonderful Christmas. Judi

  • Congratulations–you have every right to be proud, especially with such standing!!!  And wonderful poem…”grow drunk on shared silence.”  I like that!

  • Congratulations Jan!! How exciting. Love the poem, definitely made me contemplate what I’m doing for Christmas this year. You could be writing about my family with this one.

  • Lovely poem, and much congratulations on your graduating!! Yes, I did see ‘Crossing Delancey’-it was great, and so was The Roches music! Happy Holidays!

  • Hey Jan congrats. You are sucj a great success story. Most of us writers/screenwriters need to stick together. You write great poetry.

  • First of all congratulations! 3.6 GPA that’s amazing! Wow..
    And secondly, your poem is marvellous. You really bring out the festivity of the season, sumptiousness of the food and awkwardness of it all…

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