May 29, 2007

  • Mosaic Writing Challenge

    I don’t write many mosaic poems, but I wrote one last night.  A mosaic is where you piece together one whole thought or theme based on short vignettes or stanzas.  The mosaic form can also be used for essays and short stories.  Anyway, LOL, end of your English lesson!  Here is my mosaic…

    Games with my Mother

    Sorry

    Soothing clucks emit soft and low
    trembling her bosom as my
    tears fall.  Her hands flutter,
    wings of a mother hen,
    as my plastic soldiers return home.

    War

    The tedium stirs in my legs
    as they kick and swing beneath the table.
    Impatient sighs fall like grenades
    wreaking havoc on Mother’s nerves.
    Cards are flung, the last War we play.

    Monopoly

    I press the iron on the cardboard,
    scrutinize the rainbow of money.
    Railroads are more interesting than property
    and I still cry when I lose.
    Clearly, no future Me in real estate.

    Scrabble

    I have found my crack cocaine
    as my mind smokes words
    like zineb (a pesticide.)
    I dream of dictionaries
    and double, triple scores.

    Small Talk

    When we grow tired of games
    like “Who is the Worst Daughter”
    or “My Mother is so Crazy”
    we slip out a new bored
    and chat on dancing with the stars.

Comments (8)

  • I want to do this. Message me about it.

    ALSO I NEED A STAFF WRITER FOR VENUS ENVY!!! Someone who can tackle article assignements. Game.

    Email me at jdj@venusenvymag.com

    And joing the damn V TEAM

  • Ooooooooooo!! That’s a good one. Gotta think about this one. 

    YOU GOTTA JOIN US ON VE!!! YOU GOTTA!!!

  • I like how you did this–different and nice!

  • fascinating form/ Thanks for finding me so I could discover you.

  • Forget my email> Do the castration article

  • Amazing mosaics-have never heard of that form! You are such a great writer. Compliments are so necessary sometimes, aren’t they? Love to you.

  • RYC Thank you Jan! They are kind of cute aren’t they. I wish I had the gift of poetry like you do, there is certainly no lack of imagery and emotion in my day to day life.

  • I love this! It’s (They’re) [an] amazing piece(s)!

    I love your writing style. I’m so glad you commented on my page so I could be drawn to this. Thank you so much! Especially at this time of my life with its various situations, it reaches me.

    Looking forward to more! Thanks again.

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