September 17, 2006

  • If I met Jesus singing karaoke…

    GoJake has been doing a great job giving me things to write about lately.

    And Jesus Sings

    I wasn’t sure what to expect
    as the savior of the world
    cleared his throat and stood
    behind the microphone.

    His throaty voice surprised me,
    deep, resonant and baritone
    not at all like the angelic tenor
    I imagined he would be.

    I smiled as he sang “Sweet Caroline,
    good times never felt so good.”
    And I did feel good, seeing him
    this close, this human, this happy.

    I asked if he wanted a drink
    and he smiled and shook his head.
    He did lean over and take one of my cheesy fries
    and his face was pure bliss as he chewed it.

    I felt shy when it was my turn to sing.
    I leaned in to Jake and whispered the name
    of a different song, one more befitting.
    She winked and changed the disk.

    Familiar and warm chords
    filled the crowded bar with a
    beautiful kind of melancholy.
    I lifted my heart and voice like a prayer.

    “What the world needs now,
    Is love, sweet love,” and suddenly
    my voice was as smoky and sad
    as my surroundings.

    People stopped their chatter
    and leaned towards me at
    the edge of their chairs,
    listening for the first time all night.

    I sang for the broken-hearted,
    the love-lorn, the misplaced souls,
    and for those who had been lonely
    for way too long.

    And Jesus wept.

     

    Ok…NOW I think its done.  Tell me if you think otherwise.
    Janette

Comments (17)

  • Very interesting so far-keep it going! Just hope he doesn’t break down and sing ‘Devil with a Blue Dress On’-hehe.

  • i.  love this.  (:

    jan

  • :o ) love it…. definitly comes from a different perspective…. I suppose if he was well recieved he might hit the road as a soloist with Brother Loves Traveling Salvation Show….. marry Holly Holy while crossing the country and maybe have a baby named Sooliamon  ;o)

    Chris

  • That is wonderful…

    Thanks for subscribing.

  • Thanks for stopping by! Samwise — another LOTR fan??? We are already attached to the kitten, I’m sure he’ll be staying!

    Loved this post —

  • Cool. I like the way it ends.

  • ryc: us too! Hence Pippin and an Elvish name for the dog. We love scifi/fantasy (mostly fantasy) We love David Eddings, Gemel, McCaffery, Pier Anthony etc. etc.

    Loved the ending.

  • Jesus approves.  

    I love the image of the savoir in all his humanity eating fries. Well done Jan.

  • Love it, love it, love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • BIG SMILE! I like it!

    Chris

  • Great one.  Rebel that Jesus was, he’d have loved Karaoke!

  • And thanks for your nice comment.  I hope some time you can record one of your songs and put it on your blog (however the heck one does that!)

  • beautiful!  *applause*  well done.

  • PS: pain is, indeed, a powerful teacher.  i think that the most influential lessons in my life have been the gut-wrenching, slice your heart out and stomp it on the floor kind of pain.  the ugly stuff.  the look inside and see how black my heart is and *hate* it stuff.  it seems…you understand this as well.  (;  adversity builds character…in those who are willing to be willing, no?

    thanks for subscribing.

    jan

  • Wow. Very cool!!!!

    I sent you a message!

  • RYC: LOL Evidently cake diving is a new generation thing. My mother would have been mortified if we had done that. <G> Both my nephews had their own mini cakes. I must admit it was hilarious though.

    It’s nice to see you writing again, you have too much talent to let it sit idle for too long. Hugs.

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