October 21, 2005
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Check out VaporousVenom today…a most excellent post. Here is my poem in response.
And He Was Beauty
Beauty came to me in thoughts
of your strong articulate mouth
sense of humor dirty and cheerful
close cropped hair of salt and pepper wisdom
experienced hips browned by the sun
hands chiseled and dark with hard work
and I loved you for how much you taught me
about art, music, joy, and aesthetics,
my caveman with a scholar’s heart
in blue sweatpants, ripped golf shirt,
so perfect.
Comments (13)
Sounds like my boyfriend.
I think I need to go out into the heat to … um … wash my car … yeah … oh, it’s just so … hot …
Oh, I’m sorry, did you say something?
ye know Jan, i gotta quit reading your poetry at work. It makes it too warm in here.. .and it’s hard to explain why I’m . . ye know. . sweating. You really do have a knack for sensual poetry.
Is it warm in here, or is it me?
a beautifully crafted poem …
random props..keep up the good work
LOL…for some reason that struck me as humorous…I hadn’t thought of this one as being all that sexy, but now that I think about it, maybe it is. VaporousVenom’s post on beauty inspired me to write a poem about the man who got away…
yummy…i’m thinking fabio from those romance novel covers in the check out line. i find it humorous & sexy.
Hi Jan! Thanks for the compliments. I feel honored that something I wrote inspired you , and this poem is wonderful. I love it so much .
I like ‘my caveman with a scholars heart’. All the poem is so telling. There is as Lady S says, a touch of sensuality, brautiful poetry , sweet lady!
Peace and Love
RYC: Thanks for you kinds compliments:)
RAaaar! I see him! Nice poem in response to VV’s post. Your comment was so complimentary. I have only written two stories, have a never-finished third. Most of what I write, is poetry and musings. Consider short stories? Perhaps, one day, I will have a go at it. Thank you.
a neat response as well…
Im subbing to you so i wont miss any of your poems!
Peace and Love:)
‘caveman with a scholar’s heart’
That is great.
yummy
That was very vivid! Thanks for stopping by my site.