October 1, 2005
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New poem…I’ve been lost in a sea of papers for school. Was nice to take a few moments to write something besides fake grant proposals. Working title is “Seamonster” but I am not sure I like it. Please let me know if you think of anything.
Jan
Seamonster
It was a shiny, plastic cup,
red, the kind one finds at parties,
and it was filled with the ocean.
The sand in this cup was white and
cradled tiny shells which were lost
homesteads of miniscule creatures.
The dreams in the sand were a child’s
and she would hold it in her hands,
wishing for a life near blue sea.
She made for it an altar on
a beat-up cedar treasure chest
with mermaids taped to its facade.
In her sleep she swam with dolphins
and one day, lost in a daydream
she failed to hear her mother’s call.
Angry arms knocked down the altar
and a slap turned away fresh tears
as carpet swallowed up the beach.
As she tried to scoop the remnants
into her small and trembling hands,
her mother grabbed a long straw broom.
Comments (5)
Instead of “Seamonster” (which is far too obvious) name it “Kraken” (which is a type of seamonster).
I love this poem like whoa.
Thank you for the comment on my site. I really liked this poem … really nice writing style you have. Very nice meeting you … hope to read more …
the song is called “he loves you” by Danen Kane.
What a poignant poem, yet probably so true of many kids’ lives. Thanks for the comment.
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