May 14, 2007
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What a Weekend…
I’m having a rough time today. My Dad fell and broke his hip yesterday, and with him being terminally ill, he is in a tremendous amount of pain. He needs surgery too, and the doctors are afraid of serious complications, but the fracture is too serious not to do the surgery.
Also, this weekend I fell and broke my foot, so I am in a good deal of pain myself. If you could send your prayers and energy our way, I would greatly appreciate it.Now for something a little more happy. I got word today that Clark Street Review out of Colorado will be publishing my poems “And the Beat goes on,” and “The Girl You Ended Up With.” In addition, I’ll have some work in the maiden issue of Venus Envy, a Magazine for Women. Check out GoJake’s blog for more details. She’s the editor-in-chief.Here’s a poem. I wrote it from my mother’s perspective, as if she were an old woman looking back on her marriage as her husband becomes an old man. Unfortunately, she won’t get that chance unless a miracle happens.GlaciersMelting suits you, Darling,as your picture changes froma once prickly young republicanto one that sees with golden wit.The psyche struggles in a searchfor usefulness, and your fingersprod plaster and lathe ceilings for signsof springing from their keystones.This is a good place to be,where losses and sums unpaid have fadedbeyond our thatched roofinto the Mecca of lost decades.There is something about your smelland how you’ve traded expensive colognefor the scent of honest crafted sweat.This leaves me bent towards pleasure.The future is a shrug, an afterthought,It collects dust near our inner roomas we focus on the Great Plains of now,the landscape of solitude and togetherness.
Comments (12)
OUCH! I hope you’re taking it easy. That has to hurt. I’m sending all the vibes your way darlin.
RYC: IT DOES????????
prayers in the air….. for you and yours.
ryc: no i didn’t, it’s just a background photo but thanks i thouht it would go well with the song
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Chris
I hope you feel better soon. I know how it is to have a sick parent. God Bless you Jan.
Such a beautiful poem.
Hope your broken foot heals without complications.
Condolences for your Dad.
Oh dear, tons of healing thoughts headed your way. Hang tough. Easier said than done of course.
Gosh, such tough times. So sorry about your mishap as well as your father’s–I shall add you both to my prayers.
Forgot to say I loved your poem–and congratulations on your successes!!!
Thanks for your lovely comments on my entries. You’ve written a yet another wonderful poem. You make them so vivid that one can easily visualise, and I especially like the line,
‘There is something about your smell
and how you’ve traded expensive cologne
for the scent of honest crafted sweat.’
Very pure and original
By the way, congrats on your new house!
First of all I am so sorry about your Dad’s situation and then on top of that you have a broken foot. You are in my thoughts and I hope things get better soon.
Congratulations on the poem’s being published and the one you shared with us here is so nice. Very well written and says it all. Thanks for sharing. Also I read your comment and agree….perky shmerky….just let my smile be my beacon.
Gosh! Sorry to hear about so many breakages at once…….you and your dad have my sympathies and my daimoku. Get well soon.
Tomesara.x
Sorry….Hang in there. hugs
Prayers for you and your father. I LOVE the poem. Well done.