February 12, 2007

  • Dionysus

    Did a rewrite of this poem.  Would love your feedback!

    Dionysus

    By Janette Schafer

     

    When the supplicant first worshipped

    the angel, his marble arms stretched

    to welcome her reverential embrace.

    His face bore the marks of knowing,

    the skillfully carved body taut,

    muscled, and beckoning.  He came

    to life before her eyes, beauty and art

    personified, his wings melting into

    the still perfection of skin.

     

    Like Mary Magdalene, she bathed him

    with the honey of her glistening eyes.

    and his hairless torso shimmered like gossamer.

    How intimate, how intimate,

    she sang the words in her mind,

    awakening beneath the sweetness

    of his breath, his hands, his body.

     

    Their coupling was an act of holiness

    beautiful in its violence, its fury,

    a complete giving over of the flesh.

    She explored every part of him, the

    tender pink of his nipples, the down

    of fire, yellow and white, the stone

    he was carved from both sturdy

    and pliable, this living shrine of

    rock and velvet, silk and sun.

     

     The temple of this familiar

    haunted and haunting, the man-boy

    and the child-woman, the breaths of

    thankfulness, the weeping of the

    bittersweet, the nectar of forgiveness,

    the hallowed ground of experience,

    Amen and Amen.

     

Comments (3)

  • A gentle, beautiful poem that rings so powerfully of pure love. You’ve written very well yet again.

  • You do a beautiful job of using contrasing, contradictory words–holiness/violence, sturdy/pliable, haunted/haunting–beautiful poem and well done!

  • Beautiful!  I love this.

    Nice musical choice too!

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